Haha I am not come (1) here to argue with you or others one (2). Right, but your voice sound like escalate (3). So, I am not good in English but I can handle and done (4) what I want to be done.
Ok, I am not likly (5) call (6) on you help or dispute (7) with you. I stay here to ask for help with right attitude ok. Look at yourself before verdict (8) some one (9) else, ok. Now we can centralized (10) my call on for help (11). I have this file (12) request for help a good or short effective method wrote (13) in English (14). If you are good want. Lets (15) show your skills in English and Excel too. Don't try to escalate (16) with other involved who just mercy in peace (17). That's all you want or something else. Let's talk here.
(1) fundamental, boy, fundamental. After "I am", the verb must be in present participle form. That is, "coming"
(2) redundant word.
(3) poor usage of word form. Should be "escalated"
(4) wrong tense used. Should be "do"
(5) In Vietnamese: hieuchetlien
(6) same as 1, the verb must be in present participle form. That is, "calling"
(7) messy
(8) it's a noun, and can not be used in place of a verb
(9) careless
(10) after the verb "can", any other verb must be in pure form.
(11) "on my call for help" is better grammar
(12) same as 5, hieuchetlien
(13) (14) same as 12
(15) do you really mean "lets", or just a typo?
(16) same as 12
(17) same as 16. Be careful, the terms "mercy" & and "peace" usually go together when someone dies.
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